its great, there are a few words that break the beat but apart from that it is a good poem

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Don't try to fix me i'm not broken

(\_/) copy the bunny
(0.o) into you're sign
'(__)' help him achieve world domination

Such as?

thats a sad story
poor kahli

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"you dont drown by falling in the water, you drown by staying there.' -james-

Danke... you were with Hope when I told her about it, weren't you?

yes she was.
im sorry for your lose.

ill talk to you if you want?
ill even be nice im here.

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"you dont drown by falling in the water, you drown by staying there.' -james-

And know, I'm here for you, too. Don't forget that, Rabbit, when times get dark, ok?!

Maybe because, in the second strofe, you break the ABCB structure, instead you use ABAC

So if maybe you could've written:

Flitting around my mind
Images of those soft brown eyes
Causes unbearable pain
Remembering those sulky sighs

to maintain the "beat" but of course it's your poem and the way you make your poem as you want it makes it yours
and I kind of like how you break the structure and then restore it, gives it a variative twist

It is a sad poem indeed, very emotional, you're good at that love your poetry (and you too of course )

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The pattern I was aiming for, was ABCB DEDF, but in the last stanza, I messed that up a little But I didn't mind, as this was mostly an outlet for me to relieve some of the grief I was feeling.

And that is the most important reason of poetry !

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